Satellite
ending,
beginning- the
sum of parts and the whole
leave; enter, fight
escape. Blend, mix
dance and play and
hurt each other, so gently
that they laugh in
astonishment. No tears.
tears are for flavoring kisses
of farewell, so sweet but
so incomplete without
that sad, salty trickle of
fear… transit room boarding
passes loading space shuttles
flying off into the great unknown
and both of us remain
here but I’m still alone
without you, spinning
satellite. more moving
more pushing shoving
take no luggage,
leave no bags
of love, and
sorrow
all the memories of
walking down empty
morning beaches, finally
figuring it out… memories
of the times we never
had.
5 comments:
Very impressive!
Have you thought of pacing this into 10-lined stanzas? It helps align the concentration till the very end of the poem.
awww....*hug*
yeah .. or have you ever thought of nfondfoheg nefongejgegji mdbvoifm , yeah , that helps do something or the other :p
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its fine just the way it is ..
as always... deeply interesting.
-- nudy
Nice one.
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